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08 — Content Strategy

Voice, tone, narrative arc, and editorial cadence. The rulebook that keeps the field-journal voice intact.

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Voice, tone, narrative arc, and editorial cadence. The point is to keep the field-journal feel that already lives in components/sections/ alive everywhere a sentence gets written.

Voice in one paragraph

Quiet, observant, slightly old-fashioned. Specific before general. Willing to be wrong about itself. Never breathless, never performative, never punny. Concrete imagery carries the feeling; the reader is trusted to complete the thought. The closest reference points are Masanobu Fukuoka's _One Straw Revolution_, Wendell Berry's essays, and the printed agronomy notes pinned to a wooden noticeboard at a Soliga homestead.

Tone rules

  1. Concrete before abstract. "The ragi is shoulder-high"

not "growth is impressive."

  1. Show labour. Every product description names at least one person,

one tool, or one practice.

  1. No marketing language. Forbidden words:

curated, artisanal, premium, experience (as a noun), unforgettable, journey, bespoke, exclusive, hand-picked (use by hand, today, with a date).

  1. One idea per paragraph.
  2. No exclamation marks. Anywhere.
  3. Time is specific. Dates, seasons, weeks of the year.
  4. Restraint over completion. If a sentence doesn't earn its place,

delete it.

Headline language

AvoidPrefer
"Subscribe to fresh, organic produce!""Subscribe to a plot."
"An unforgettable experience""A weekend at the farm."
"Carefully curated by experts""Made here, by name."
"Premium A2 cow ghee""A2 cow ghee, from the herd at Z8."
"Where luxury meets nature""Lokkanahalli, on the edge of BRT."

Tone by surface

SurfaceVoice
Homepage scroll-narrativeAlready-poetic; preserve exactly.
Subscription landing (/subscribe)Practical, quieter than the homepage. Concrete baskets, dates.
Zone deep pages (/zones/[id])Field-journal entries. Name the farmer when you can.
Photo-update captionsOne sentence, present tense, dated.
PDP (/shop/[slug])Origin story first, use notes second, never features bullets.
Order confirmationA small receipt, no soft-sell.
Admin screensPlain instrument-panel English. No metaphor.
404 / out-of-radiusHonest, charming, never embarrassed.

Photo-update cadence (the editorial engine)

This is the stream that turns a delivery service into a relationship.

A zone's photo update is the one piece of marketing we publish every week. Cadence:

  • Weekly minimum. One update per zone, two in peak season.
  • Phase tags. sowgrowharvestpack. The caption must

use the tag's verb tense.

  • Caption ≤ 240 chars. One sentence. Always ends with a date or a

measurement ("This morning, 18 of the 24 ragi heads had bent.", "12 baskets packed for Saturday's run.", "Week 14 of the kharif.").

  • Photo set ≥ 3, ≤ 8. Always include at least one with a person in

the frame and at least one close-up of soil/produce.

  • Send window. Tuesday or Wednesday evening, so it lands in the

inbox before Saturday's delivery.

Caption examples (good)

  • Last week's rain held. The ragi is a handspan taller than on Monday.
  • Saturday baskets: 14 of greens, 12 of millets, 6 of mango pickle.
  • `Three rows of horsegram went in this morning, on a mist that tasted

like woodsmoke.`

Caption examples (avoid)

  • 🌱 Fresh harvest alert — get yours now! (marketing voice, banned emoji)
  • We've hand-selected the best of this week's harvest for you. (banned phrase)
  • An exciting new chapter in your wellness journey. (banned words ×3)

Web-app copy inventory (Phase 0)

A reader of app/page.tsx would currently note these lines as exceptional — they should remain anchors when we draft new copy in later phases:

  • Hero: _"Where does your food come from?"_ (untouchable)
  • Vision: _"Two worlds. One plate of food."_
  • Founder: _"The city will feed you for the rest of your life. Spend two

days understanding who feeds the city."_ (Jayapal)

  • Invitation: _"Come for two days. Return a little less of a stranger

to your own plate."_

When Phase 0 adds a Three pillars interlude, copy one of these voices. We are not chasing a different register; we are extending the same one.

Pillars copy-block (drafted, replaceable)

**Subscription — know the field that feeds you. A plot of the 1-acre, photo updates from it every week, and a basket at your door on Saturday morning. Cancel any time. Experience — live what you eat. A weekend at the farm. Stay in bamboo. Eat what was harvested an hour ago. Walk with the people who grew it. Sustenance — *make the farm stand.*** Cows, composting, seed-saving, the daily Agnihotra. The practices that keep the soil alive and the produce honest — and the small jars, soaps, and flours they make possible.

What we are not

  • We are not a wellness brand.
  • We are not a luxury-organic retailer.
  • We are not a content site that sells merch on the side.

If a future page reads like any of those, the test of any decision (§"The test of any decision" in 01_VISION.md) failed.