Design · 4 min
08 — Content Strategy
Voice, tone, narrative arc, and editorial cadence. The rulebook that keeps the field-journal voice intact.
Design · 4 min
Voice, tone, narrative arc, and editorial cadence. The rulebook that keeps the field-journal voice intact.
Voice, tone, narrative arc, and editorial cadence. The point is to keep the field-journal feel that already lives in
components/sections/alive everywhere a sentence gets written.
Quiet, observant, slightly old-fashioned. Specific before general. Willing to be wrong about itself. Never breathless, never performative, never punny. Concrete imagery carries the feeling; the reader is trusted to complete the thought. The closest reference points are Masanobu Fukuoka's _One Straw Revolution_, Wendell Berry's essays, and the printed agronomy notes pinned to a wooden noticeboard at a Soliga homestead.
not "growth is impressive."
one tool, or one practice.
curated, artisanal, premium, experience (as a noun), unforgettable, journey, bespoke, exclusive, hand-picked (use by hand, today, with a date).
delete it.
| Avoid | Prefer |
|---|---|
| "Subscribe to fresh, organic produce!" | "Subscribe to a plot." |
| "An unforgettable experience" | "A weekend at the farm." |
| "Carefully curated by experts" | "Made here, by name." |
| "Premium A2 cow ghee" | "A2 cow ghee, from the herd at Z8." |
| "Where luxury meets nature" | "Lokkanahalli, on the edge of BRT." |
| Surface | Voice |
|---|---|
| Homepage scroll-narrative | Already-poetic; preserve exactly. |
Subscription landing (/subscribe) | Practical, quieter than the homepage. Concrete baskets, dates. |
Zone deep pages (/zones/[id]) | Field-journal entries. Name the farmer when you can. |
| Photo-update captions | One sentence, present tense, dated. |
PDP (/shop/[slug]) | Origin story first, use notes second, never features bullets. |
| Order confirmation | A small receipt, no soft-sell. |
| Admin screens | Plain instrument-panel English. No metaphor. |
| 404 / out-of-radius | Honest, charming, never embarrassed. |
This is the stream that turns a delivery service into a relationship.
A zone's photo update is the one piece of marketing we publish every week. Cadence:
sow → grow → harvest → pack. The caption mustuse the tag's verb tense.
measurement ("This morning, 18 of the 24 ragi heads had bent.", "12 baskets packed for Saturday's run.", "Week 14 of the kharif.").
the frame and at least one close-up of soil/produce.
inbox before Saturday's delivery.
Last week's rain held. The ragi is a handspan taller than on Monday.Saturday baskets: 14 of greens, 12 of millets, 6 of mango pickle.like woodsmoke.`
🌱 Fresh harvest alert — get yours now! (marketing voice, banned emoji)We've hand-selected the best of this week's harvest for you. (banned phrase)An exciting new chapter in your wellness journey. (banned words ×3)A reader of app/page.tsx would currently note these lines as exceptional — they should remain anchors when we draft new copy in later phases:
days understanding who feeds the city."_ (Jayapal)
to your own plate."_
When Phase 0 adds a Three pillars interlude, copy one of these voices. We are not chasing a different register; we are extending the same one.
**Subscription — know the field that feeds you. A plot of the 1-acre, photo updates from it every week, and a basket at your door on Saturday morning. Cancel any time. Experience — live what you eat. A weekend at the farm. Stay in bamboo. Eat what was harvested an hour ago. Walk with the people who grew it. Sustenance — *make the farm stand.*** Cows, composting, seed-saving, the daily Agnihotra. The practices that keep the soil alive and the produce honest — and the small jars, soaps, and flours they make possible.
If a future page reads like any of those, the test of any decision (§"The test of any decision" in 01_VISION.md) failed.